Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Marriage is one of the most important relationships in life. Virtually everyone at a certain point in their life drams about having a long-lasting partner that only death can break up. Although some people may prefer getting married with someome different, I believe it is better to marry a person with your same values, tastes, and a way of seeing life.
The first reason why I have this point of view it is because a marriage would more enjoyful with someone similar to you. You can do the same entertaining things, got to the same places, and agree in several topics. For instance, let's suppose you are an ambitious, wealthy man who loves luxurious cars, of bombastic brand names, such as Rolls Royce, Masseratti, etc. Adn your wife also love these kinds of automobiles, you both would be happy to save money to purchase a amazing car. On the other hand, if you are the same man, but your wife does not like cars at all, and she loves expensive bags and clothes, for her it would not be nice that you want to spend all your money in a "stupid" car. Additionally, she might try to persuade you that clothes are more important than car,s and you pobably will never buy the car of your dreams.
Second, it is more likely to last a longer time together if you have the same perspective on life. Irreconcialiable differences are a common cause of divorce. For couples who think too different is difficult to adapt to the other person. To be specific, if you are a atheist woman and married a christian man, you would probably have different opinions about controversial topics. You man may be participatnig in a pro-life event, while you are in a rebellious mob destroying everything you see to express you anger because you do not have your right to decide a baby. At the end of the day, you may see each other furiously, and the, you begin a discussion. After several weeks of quarrels, you cannot tolarate that situation anymore, and you will decide to go away and not to see you ex-husband anymore. So, as marriage with different beliefs are more like to discuss, then they are more like to last less time together.
In summary, I think that marriage partner should be more similar since it is more fun and they are likely to have a longer and calmer relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61670761671 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67238749905 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6961747365 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.388888889 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341199018631 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107281359404 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705845659357 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167151372013 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123449479987 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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