Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young.
Throughout the life time, human's features and requirements have being changed; therefor, each period of life requires specific actions. A plethora of people is in the conviction that old people should experience new occurrences as less time is left for achieving to their wishes. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that it is more important for the youths to have adventure in their life. I am of the opinion that, the later opinion is more acceptable and the following explanations, will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, new experience can entirely change the life of a person in different aspects of life. Undoubtedly, lifestyle is the primary issue that has been altered during vicissitudes of life. Imagine a young boy who has decided to immigrate to another country in order to continue his education. This opportunity opens up multitude chances for this youth to get acquainted with different thing that never happens if he stays in his own town. He get familiar with new people who have another culture and beliefs; consequently, he may think in different way and takes steps in order to fulfill his new needs, requirement. Furthermore, professional life and career is another issue which may affect by new experiences. For instance, if a fresh-graduated student takes risk and instead of working in an average company, gets a job as an apprentice in a well-known company. By accepting this challenge, he will gain a lot of precious practical knowledge, however, it may be hard for new comer to handle and manage all those obstacles.
Another crucial fact that should be taken into consideration is that the nature of each stage of life needs particular conduct that is why juveniles work hard since they should try their best to accomplish to their targets. obviously, they have more strength and energy to investigate new things. In addition to this fact that they have more capability to endure the hardships that happen owing to taking risks or new experiences. in contrast, old people cannot resist to difficulties as they usually get involved in diverse diseases such as heart illness or dibates which make them really vulnerable in problematic circumstance’s.
On the basis of the point mentioned above, I am convinced that the taking risk in early phases of life has a variety of advantages for the human as it determines the future lifestyle and career according to this issue that they have more energy to endure the plausible problems. Although,, old individuals need () the activities which make them more relaxed without any pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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... way and takes steps in order to fulfill his new needs, requirement. Furthermore,...
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...e and career is another issue which may affect by new experiences. For instance, if a fre...
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23467230444 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.158562367865 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0993657505285 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0359408033827 0.046263068375 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486257928118 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124735729387 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0380549682875 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93788052409 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380549682875 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00211416490486 0.00188951952338 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.093023255814 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211416490486 0.0209618222197 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0274841437632 0.0139019557991 198% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2629.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 429.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12820512821 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358974358974 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282051282051 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202797202797 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156177156177 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93788052409 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.5981513208 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2352941176 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.9824281193 48.84282405 184% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.647058824 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.4404223228 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.6347826087 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167497405366 0.300154397459 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126105581207 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0725808974086 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489137218476 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143856436456 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717611697659 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332373291236 0.0781384742642 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341270173012 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00618612855048 0.067059652881 9% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120639245763 0.210909579961 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185709314392 0.0618886996521 30% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.