Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Although both working as group or alone can be beneficial in some extent, of course, one of them is more significant for success and other concerns. Personally, I believe that working individually is more beneficial than working with others. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, in today's world, everyone has their own individuality, and they have divergent motivation about the project. Needless to say, finding someone who is encouraged equally as you is unusual or even impossible. Therefore, some of group members are more conscientious about group work while others are reluctant to perform the task. Thereby, overall production of project will be lowered because of these people who are unwilling to accomplish their work. Moreover, people who are motivated will be frustrated because they will be exploited by others. To illustrate this, I would like to share my experience as freshmen in the university. In the last session, my mathematics professors organized teams with five members, and assigned project for each groups. Unfortunately, almost all other undergraduates of my team was lazy and not well-informed about the assignment. In order to get grade of homework, I finished the task almost all alone. Indeed, we would have get more satisfactory grade if we had worked together. Drawing from my own experience, some individuals will be exploited by others unjustly when people work as group.
Secondly, Of course motivation is crucial factor of success. In fact, it is motivating to know that success of the performance will be belonged to me when I work alone. By contrast, reputation and success of project will be addressed to the group as whole irrespective of what individuals contributed when people work together. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Few years ago, I and my friends rehearsed dancing in order to dance on the stage of high school graduation ceremony. In fact, I really did not want to exert my all potential because I was aware of the fact that audiences will clap for us but not only me. Hence, I was failing to practicing properly, which is the reason why our band performed inadequately. In consequence, in a group project, individuals will be daunted because they know that success will not be addressed to them individually. The less motivated people as individual, the worse performance will be done as group.
Finally, everyone can manage their time properly when they work alone because they will organize matters independently of others. On the other hand, regarding others opinion about time about meeting should be addressed in order to make meeting between team members. Hence, people may be unable to take advantage on all possible time because they need to wait others. For example, I do not act in accordance with others accessibility to my personal time management because I am working alone, which provides me great opportunity to maximize my capability of performing.
In summation, I am of the opinion of people can accomplish more satisfactory performance if they work alone. This is because encouraged people will not be used unjustly by others, they will be motivated because they know that they are in charge of the task, and agenda will be organized appropriately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
... say, finding someone who is encouraged equally as you is unusual or even impossible. Ther...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 969, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...almost all alone. Indeed, we would have get more satisfactory grade if we had worke...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, in fact, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2788.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97014229326 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 898.2 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0655314459 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1379310345 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7586206897 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1724137931 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966998801595 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326335511622 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487166575925 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06686740218 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379260613521 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.