Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Since the dawn of humanity, taking a decision has always been a great challenge either it will be fruitful or not. Being lead as a prosperous and Envy life to others or the society, no matter what, doing something efficiently is very important. As a unanimous conviction, some ought to stick being a conventionalist as to work 5 days a week, but the challengers would like to take a challenge by considering it for 3 days. Since the Challenge is the most controversial word whatever the outcome it brings, but, I, for one, subscribe to the later one, for quite a few reasons, two conspicuous one have been giving upon under.
The first justification for doing work for 3 days is, getting more time to contribute to the family by physic. My uncle is a great example of this. Being a neighbor of him, due to work as a govt. employee, I used to see him maintain a regular life where almost 10-11 hours spent in an office, after that, my cousins were busy with their study while he returned. Consequencing as a great impact on the relationship between him and his offspring. In the weekend time as time is quite short, he used to be busy with the weekly shopping and others necessary kinds of stuff. But if the work days was 3 then he might get quite a long time to spend a quality time with his family, which not only helped him to be a good contributor but also a good parent also.
On top of that, the reason behind to make this norm to work 5 days a week to make more works with efficiently. In order to get free of stress, as the contemporary world is getting day after day very competitive, needed a quite long period of time after every work cycle, which could only possible to make after 3 consecutive days of work schedule. As working as a software developer, after a very hardship of work schedule, I used to get an invitation from most of my colleagues but rejected most of the time supposed to think that the time will not be worth enough rather than sleep here. But I wish that if time would be 4 instead of 2 days then It would be a great opportunity for me to be relaxed, be fixed tiredness by enjoying the sublime weather of nature.
To wrap it up, I can only say it is getting a need not required to make the time schedule to 3 days, on the basis of the aforementioned ground.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, as to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33410672854 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64073615459 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512761020882 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9676633995 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9375 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22293646798 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742155380099 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646973256604 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120593477924 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644355202569 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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