people do many different things to stay healthy. what do you do for good health?
Health, which seems to be a natural need for mankind, penetrates almost every facet of people’s lives from all walks of life. in this regard, there is fierce controversy over what can one do to stay healthy. As far as I am concerned, some factors can influence our health.some of which are healthy foods, exercise, not smoking and drinking, among which I believe exercise and healthy food are the most considerable ones for the reasons mentioned hereunder.
To begin which, without any shadow of a doubt, healthy food has a direct impact on one’s health. The more healthy meal one eats, the healthier she or he would be. unfortunately, because of the new revolution in the food industry, fast-food become available almost everywhere. It is vivid that these fast food are not made of fresh and healthy ingredients; therefore, it has a major negative impact on people’s health. for instance, more than half of population of USA suffer from mortal diseases such as heart stroke, diabetes and so forth which caused by overweight and. The major reason for such diseases is eating unhealthy food regularly. Most people opt for this kind of food because of their accessibility and their price; however, this food has an irreparable impact on one’s life. in my opinion, one by the diminishing amount of weekly fast food which he or she consumes and substitute with fresh and high-nutritive meals, can keep fatal diseases away and stay in good physical condition.
Another way to improve health has to do with exercise. In my view, one by allotting time to exercise at least every week can improve her or his health immensely. As an illustration, my grandfather has some major health issues like romanticism and back pain. He always reminds me that if he had been devoted some time to do exercise when he was younger, he would be in better health condition now. Additionally, Although, it may be claimed that nowadays people have not enough time to do exercise every day and must devote their whole time to their occupation or their family problem, with an accurate plan, they can find ample time to do their exercise. Moreover, thanks to the rapid evolvement of technology, people can readily exercise from home and by doing so not only can they save a substantial amount of money but also save lots of time.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that exercise and healthy food have a great impact on people’s both physical and mental health and people by changing their eating habits from eating fast food to healthy and nutritious food can improve their health condition drastically. Let's not forget that health is of one precious and valuable part of mankind’s life and it needs to take care of constantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92933618844 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76418773401 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522483940043 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2278243174 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.157894737 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5789473684 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200714825153 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700791256155 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670689670131 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128015850973 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586353608039 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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