Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children” Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the present, many things had changed a lot in the last few decades not only advanced technology but also the culture and lifestyle of people. Some people may think that life today is harder and more difficult than in the past that depends on the lifestyle of each person. From my perspective, I agree with life today is easier and more convenient than the last time and I have a few common reasons for supporting my viewpoint: advanced technology and life style of people.
Firstly, the development of technology, life gets easier than before with this fast of the progress of science and prosperity. As a result, numerous things had changed such as healthy, public transportation, communication, electric tools and computer network. One of the most important effects to people is transportation which is utilized in life daily both working and relaxation. In the previous decades, in the grandparent era, if someone would like to go to other countries such as from China to England, he may more spend time almost 1-2 months for traveling. On the other hand, in the present, he can travel to a destination less than 1-2 days and also more convenient than in the past.
Without a doubt, the lifestyle of people had significantly changed by progressing their behaviors. For example, in a few decades ago, almost students need to study in the only schools, whereas they can study all information at their home by searching on the Internet in the present. Moreover, some people may not waste time for going to a supermarket to buy some products, but they can order them on the online shops which are more suitable and more comfortable to people than the past.
All in all, I can conclude that everything has two parts, advantages and disadvantages, but I think in that topic of discussion the advantages of progressing of technology is much heavier than other parts because all human in the world has more comfortable life than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the present, many things had changed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90936555891 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83119776107 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4271370982 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122197946129 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451392140007 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452767657799 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761704061458 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295074204089 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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