Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that
seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific
examples to support our answer. (Model 1 A/D, generally one side of the issue is
discussed, similar to the Explanation type).
While some people refuse a great amount of experience in every people’s live can be beneficial, others disagree. As far as I am concerned, experience play a vital role in improving one’s live.
To shed light why I have this view, there are two main reasons have to be discussed in my essay.
To begin with, it is worth stating the point that one curtail factor is one who undergoes sever in his or her live is able to learn from them.to be more specific, experience is live a teacher can teaches one properly. For instance, since I was in high school, I had a numerse problems with my lessons because of neither my mother nor my father were not educated, I was really tried to improve my grade as well as did perfectly my exercise. Thus, thank to working hard I could get great grade in my school. Therefore every time when I have issue, I am sure I can solve due to learn with good plan and hardworking everything is passible.
Secondly, I think it would not be exaggeration if I state that everyone can be strong and successful by learning form mistake. This means that in order to he or she has a huge number of bad and experience when they are eager to begin new work by recovery failures, it is more probable to thrive. Moreover , they have confirnce to can solve the issue. For instance, a patient with tolerate a sever dise, he or she can easily face with other issue and never give up in their life.
To sum it up, with all into account, I subscribe to experiences are useful for everyone. Not only do they learn for their mistake, but also they are more vigor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...cific, experience is live a teacher can teaches one properly. For instance, since I was...
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Line 4, column 506, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d I could get great grade in my school. Therefore every time when I have issue, I am sure...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am sure I can solve due to learn with good plan and hardworking everything is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a huge number of bad and experience when they are eager to begin new work by reco...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... it is more probable to thrive. Moreover , they have confirnce to can solve the i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o thrive. Moreover , they have confirnce to can solve the issue. For instance, a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41638225256 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52725437378 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7012354928 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132061604993 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471253020486 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399033477206 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733420467128 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356114494641 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.