Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Skilled and experience teachers play a vital role for improvement of any given school. As far as I am concerned, hiring professional tutors has more benefits than other factor. To shed light, why I have this view, there are two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, by helping decent trainer students learn faster. To be more specific, not only do expert teachers use state-the-art methods, but also they use easiest way to explain to students. For instance, since I was in high first grade, I had struggle with math. When we moved other place, I went to novel school. New my match teacher was amazing because she teach math like a fantastic game. Moreover, she gave us some wonderful video. Therefore, I could both learn faster and enhance my grade. As a result math was not a bad dream for me thanks to my export tutor.
Secondly, school can augment its rank by hiring professional teachers. It Is crystal clear that when pupils gain higher score, school will be famous among others Because there are a bit quit competitive between schools. Furthermore, every year some contest take place, by helping proper and advanced teacher students are able to thrive in game and get some medals. As a result school can prod and become one of the best schools in the city.
To sum it up, I totally agree spent money for hiring advanced teachers is essential for every school. Pupils learn quickly and enhance their grade. In addition, school can be fame in city and get more financial support for school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g decent trainer students learn faster. To be more specific, not only do expert te...
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Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the easiest'.
Suggestion: use the easiest
...se state-the-art methods, but also they use easiest way to explain to students. For instanc...
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Line 6, column 363, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...y match teacher was amazing because she teach math like a fantastic game. Moreover, s...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bits'?
Suggestion: bits
...famous among others Because there are a bit quit competitive between schools. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39072281027 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3008347999 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39848946655 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126265049537 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198820201642 0.0737576698707 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285389925406 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.360323944083 0.0645574589148 558% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.