Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, parents can learn more from their children than their children can learn from their parents.
These days, there is no doubt that parents invest a lot in their children, especially for education. For this reason, it is likely that most of parents are now some steps behind their children. some people states that it is not for the exposing to knowledges that children have makes them smart and parents have to learn from them, it is the children who always have to learn from their mom and dad. However, I am against the point. I strongly believe that parents should break the old rules, observe, and obtain some essential skills their children successfully perform. I elaborate some of my reasons below.
To begin with, the new era of technology revolution acquires people a lot more skills. Those technologies are now applied in daily life. Therefore, adults have to adjust in the way of acknowlegde how to function some basic devices, the smartphone is one of them. In this field, I belive that children are doing the best at get to know new things, in this case, the smartphone. The kids catch up with the tech at a sprinted pace which parents cannot do so. For example, in my extended family, my 5-year-old cousin is now the teacher for his parents on how to use the smartphone, he teaches his dad to suffer the internet for news and his mom to do a search on youtube.
Secondly, language is also a hard part for parents. According to researchs, children learn language at best as they are in their early stage of infants. For instance, I acknowledge some cases in immigrated family when most of the family cannot understand english, the child is sent to a primary local school which teaches in english. The student speaks and reads the language as fluent as others, so the parents ask the child to translate papers and sometime teach them how to have some neccesary conversation.
In conclusion, I definitely assert that parents can learn more from their children as much as children can learn from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...ion. For this reason, it is likely that most of parents are now some steps behind their childre...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...e now some steps behind their children. some people states that it is not for the ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71810089021 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54440959737 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4319517402 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5294117647 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365675722115 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114076632552 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149729161973 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282546710244 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205055321766 0.0645574589148 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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