The movie is the most popular kind of art nowadays. There are several types of genres with a lot of concepts and targets. Some of them are serious and trying to show us a specific point of view of reality and some of them are not. I think there is a lot of good and joyful films which might not teach you a real-life lesson but are worthy to watch anyway.
To begin with, watching an impressive movie in less serious genres such as action or comedy can be exciting and helpful. Professional critics might not agree with this assessment and say a real movie is just a deep and meaningful one, but all of us want to have some of us too. People want to spend their time with friends and family and avoid the stressful daily routines and enter the world of pleasureful imagination. So to earn these targets most of us decide to go to the nearest cinema, buy a ticket, and then just sit back relax and enjoy the time. These processes can help us to recover from mental pressures and after that, we will be ready to back to reality and solve our difficult problems at home or work and so on.
Furthermore, the main goal of cinema is to express the artist’s emotions and to show us real art. The 7th art which is both visual and hearing might be the most appropriate tool for exposing modern art. As other older types of art going to be less popular these days, the cinema starting to rise and shine more than any time before. Cinema is the kind of art people are prefer to spend their money and time and this leads the big company to invest more and more money and attention on these precious artistic phenomenal. So there is going to be an extreme enhancement in the quality of movies and now we can see the perfect kind of art, which is depicted in the cinema or our home theaters. So watching this forte is worthful easy and cheap now.
To wrap it up, I extremely believe that watching a movie that does not necessarily educate you can be useful too, and it is not a waste of time at all, and there are different reasons for that. Not only can it be entertaining, but also it could have been powerful in other aspects of life instead of just teaching us about our daily lives.
- tpo 30 70
- tpo 30 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Younger school children aged five to ten should be required to study art and music in addition to math science history and language
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don t know for example by giving clothing and food to people who need them than they were in the past 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...e. Cinema is the kind of art people are prefer to spend their money and time and this ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, furthermore, if, so, then, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29368932039 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26840224423 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509708737864 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5780418492 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.058823529 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233921658006 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739864484637 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621394574188 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153715885822 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573758766336 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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