Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Some people state that the advent of the internet in our daily lives has had a negative impact on us. However, others believe otherwise. They think that the internet played a deeply and positive impact on us. In my opinion, the internet came to help us in overcoming many drawbacks. I state this as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, the internet has played and is playing a very important role in our lives because if it was not for it, it would not be possible to use iphones, laptops and many other sort of way of communication. For example, we may use the iphone to google some missing news or, we may use our computer to do the same job when researching documents for some kind of work that we have been working on lately. Therefore, this example elucidates the desideratum of the internet in our lives.
Moreover, the internet has a profound impact regarding to necessity of doing any kind of work because some three or even four decades ago, it was not possible to work from home. For instance, currently there are people who are needless to commute, so this way is more advantageous to be home working for international companies. Sending emails is required to accomplish tasks as their foregeirns bosses advise them to do. Thus, this instance clarifies that the internet has a positive impact on people's lives nowadays.
Furthermore, students who are homesick have the desideratum to communicate with parents and by making usage of iphone they ditch this hindrance. As an example of it, there are many foregeirn students currently who are in contact with family and other relatives through iphones. And, in the past when there was no internet, it was not possible to interact with parents however, everything has become easily to reach out thanks to the advance of the internet. Hence, this last example shows the necessity of the internet in our daily lives.
Finally, the internet has had a positive role in people's lives because with it , it is possible to have an international job, to search for help when working in documents and ditch homesick .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve role in peoples lives because with it , it is possible to have an international...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... working in documents and ditch homesick .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, sort of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75623268698 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63847712147 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490304709141 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.825297303 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128312520459 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455362958326 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285123517232 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791624122856 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00672728810476 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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