Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
although there are a lot of opinion against the improving of thechnology such as widespread use of internet,I totally agree with the idea that it will has a mostly positive effect on human life all over the word for two specific reasons.
The main reason is that using of different medias through the internet helps people to control their government. as every one probably knows, governments are not respectful to the law and regulatioins all the time. they usually hide their illegal actions and commit the unforgivable mistakes to stay powerful. Extensive users of internet can observe every actions of the political persons and convey the information via the network which is completely helpful and a wonder to the politicans that they are watched all the time to inhibit them from constitution in wrong actions. for example, in the past, when people barely hear about their government's action, in my country, the government easily execute the childern who commited the crime but after using the social media, and becoming aware of such actions, people started to inform each other about this harmful situation and protested against that until it become removed completely. As you can see the internet had a really vital and positive function among this process.
Another reason is that, widespread use of internet improves efficiency at companies. this can be noticed when emplyees are not oblige to attend at the work place and they are able to do their job while they are sitting on their couch in their living room. this fact is beneficial to the employers and enable them to cut their budget.for example, I remember I worked for an office in my first year of internship when I was working as a free lanser and I could stay at home and do my job without wasting my time on being on the bus through the workplace and in the other hand my boss did not have to pay for my launch. So, it was both beneficial for me and my employer and I could be able to focus on my job.
as a result, the believe that the widespread use of the internet has a positive impact on the people life overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53929421747 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546195652174 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.533245787 48.9658058833 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179602378492 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847808420954 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972067098239 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164057664988 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954793819441 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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