Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Overall the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today s world Use reasons and details to support your opinion
In this modern era, the internet is one of the most advance technology. It is necessary for the betterment of life and have numerous benefits. Some people believe that it has more positive effect while others disagree. In my view, internet have positive effect on life as it is made for our good use, but it totally depends on us how we take it. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, the use of internet is increased nowadays no one can imagine to live without it. Now, can know what is happening in the world by sitting at home, we do not have to wait for newspaper to get update like early ages. For example, I do remember when I was a child in morning my father always waits for a newspaper to know what is happening in the country but now by online applications we can see what is happening all over the globe. Thus, this example illustrate that with nor efforts people can watch all over the world.
Secondly, the internet has highly positive effects on links of communication that means now you can connect with you family and friends easily and see them, even they are in other country. For instance, in nineteen century people accustomed to send letters to their loved ones which takes almost week if it is within the country otherwise it took months. Now I am living far away from my family but when I see them and talk on video call it really relax me to see them live. Therefore, this instance elaborates that internet has changed the view of communication.
To wrap up, in my opinion the internet has a lot of positive effects in today's world if it is use in a good manner.
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Suggestion: imagine living
...ternet is increased nowadays no one can imagine to live without it. Now, can know what is happe...
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...get update like early ages. For example, I do remember when I was a child in morn...
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...t is happening in the country but now by online applications we can see what is h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41800643087 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44037678229 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0162307726 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229987737769 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815715601796 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748483088127 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167523155685 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915406321471 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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