Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
The internet has become widely used around the world nowadays and it has reach out many different classes since remotely areas to big centers. Even though many people still disagree that it is not one of the best way of communication, others state otherwise. They think that the internet has changed positively our life. In my opinion, it has improved our way of living and doing works. I state this as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, the internet made a revolution in our lives because if we look back in the past, everything was hard to accomplish. We could not even work from home as we can currently and this is extremely important. Doing home office is an excellent opportunity because it favors many people. For example, we can save time and then money by working from home because if we had to commute, we would certainly loose time with intensive traffics. Therefore, this example elucidates the desideratum of internet in our lives.
Moreover, there are many courses online which are useful for a variety of public and it can access them easily if they have access to internet. For instance, during pandemic times it is easier to attend any course through internet. Many of my friends felt the same when they were about to graduate and out of a sudden the pandemic started. They had to finish the university using computers and, even, attend internships through internet. Thus, this another instance clarifies the importance of the internet in our lives.
Furthermore, the internet is just around the corner to help us with communication and we talk with families and friends through whats app. As another example, if a person is attending an exchange program, he can speak with family so that he does not get homesick. Then, this last example shows us the necessity of internet for all of us.
Finally, the internet came to improve our lives for good because it can help us work from home, attend courses alike situation and be in contact with family and friends in order to ditch lonely.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the world nowadays and it has reach out many different classes since remotely areas to big cen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... talk with families and friends through whats app. As another example, if a person is...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75498575499 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51651310497 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54415954416 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6948938608 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8421052632 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139856419486 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477354385675 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381566210261 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809503777262 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347885088669 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the world nowadays and it has reach out many different classes since remotely areas to big cen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... talk with families and friends through whats app. As another example, if a person is...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75498575499 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51651310497 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54415954416 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6948938608 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8421052632 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139856419486 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477354385675 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381566210261 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809503777262 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347885088669 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.