Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
People's behavior varies for different style of clothes. When they dress a formal cloth, they tend to appear very formal among others. Sometimes it is a necessity to look like such a formal situation.
First, people tend to behave in a pompous way when they are dressing a military suit. For example, I remember when I joined the army one of my collegue was not wearing the military suit when out side the military base. However, he looked very different while working. I noticed that his behavior changed out of a suddenly in a pompous way as if he were the best at the job.
Second, when dressing a formal suit, people have the tendency to behavior like such a manner. For instance, one friend of mine is not concerned about many situations in his life, but once having to attend a meeting he needs to wear a suit. While participating in the meeting and sometimes after the meeting his visual changes radically. He seems a very polite man and stops making jokes at others.
Finally, different clothes do change the way at which people behave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...situation. First, people tend to behave in a pompous way when they are dressing ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pompous way" with adverb for "pompous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tuation. First, people tend to behave in a pompous way when they are dressing a military suit....
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... was not wearing the military suit when out side the military base. However, he looked v...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pompous way" with adverb for "pompous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... his behavior changed out of a suddenly in a pompous way as if he were the best at the job. Se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62903225806 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45032153312 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9160662762 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.75 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202080352291 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083943310603 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882963498494 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153897653133 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833504558447 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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