Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By persevering problem in order to start doing something is as equal as half of the process. However, all of the people consider success as one simple stepped process, success requires a lot of desire, patience and hard work. Thus, individuals had better train themselves by implementing the mission they don`t like, in order to be adaptable to go through unexpected events and to obtain experiences as much as they can.
Firstly, it is a gross thing that the one who have an ability to change depending on the situation can survive in this continuously modifying universe. Nowadays, almost every companies seek for the employee with versatility, who can work in different situations without doubt. For instance, it would be much profitable for company to have the worker who can accomplish the mission that used to be done by group of people. By improving own adaptation skill, it can give you higher probability to solve problem easily, also it can make you worthy one who the companies wish to have.
Secondly, experience is the thing that you can get only in case of trying something unfamiliar to you. If you won`t try new, you won`t be able to invent new things too. Furthermore, every employers in these days has an interest to engage someone who has an adequate experiences. As the survey suggests, the senior grade student of university should participate internship as much as they can to get enough wisdom, in sequence to increase the prospect to be hired. Consequently, doing things in spite of your favor will make you the one who have wired ranged experience.
Doing only the things you like put constrain on your way to improve, to succeed and to get valuable one in society. I would recommend others to try something new regularly, because of its feature to make you adapt easier and to possess experiences from different aspects. To conclude, it’s not because things are difficult that we dare not venture, it’s because we dare not venture that they are difficult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... equal as half of the process. However, all of the people consider success as one simple s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'experience'?
Suggestion: experience
...t to engage someone who has an adequate experiences. As the survey suggests, the senior gra...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78642942293 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0672042967 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160815441273 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584883281009 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525652818253 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100409014442 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406476745671 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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