animal assisted therapy
The lecture and the passage is both about efficiency of pet involved therapy for the people who survived from heart procedures. According to the passage, owning a pet not only improve one`s mood, however, it adjusts daily routine in a positive way little by little. As the university mentioned in the lecture conducted the survey, lots of distinct teams of scientists are repeating it in order to implement such kind of therapy in further.
In the passage, writer states importance of friendship between animals and humans which is unconditional and beneficial. Moreover, person who has a pet prevent from anxiety more easily than the one who doesn`t own. To add, the speaker supported this concept by giving a few example. Owing to the assessment, people who started petting a dog lose 20% more weight than the others who don`t have a pet. Also, it helps a lot to decrease depression and to increase happiness.
As a writer mentions, there is a significant result of increased health condition for the people who participated in the research by having a dog. Their blood pressure dropped to as same level as healthy human`s which is caused by beginning of daily exercising, including walk outside with a dog. Furthermore, speaker says, many people may be worrying what happened to the dogs after the research, even though, all of the family encouraged in the survey expressed their interest to retain the dogs as member of their family.
In further, animal assisted therapy tend to be increased in use to support the health of people who passed a clinic procedure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...mood, however, it adjusts daily routine in a positive way little by little. As the university men...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'few examples'.
Suggestion: few examples
...aker supported this concept by giving a few example. Owing to the assessment, people who st...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ood pressure dropped to as same level as healthy human's which is caused by ...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with a dog. Furthermore, speaker says, many people may be worrying what happene...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e dogs after the research, even though, all of the family encouraged in the survey express...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ssisted therapy tend to be increased in use to support the health of people who pas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02651515152 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81567326851 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0940580394 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131541540388 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499165741252 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939058485225 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114762466679 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131113200698 0.0443174109184 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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