Do you agree or disagree with following statement? People should sometimes do things they do not enjoy. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is phrase says “Life is like box of chocolate, we are not able to know what we are going to pick” it means we can’t predict how many problems and unpredictable things ambushing us. Many people seem they don’t want to take a risk by doing things they are not satisfied or unfamiliar with. In my point of view, I’d always try new things especially doing things that I have never tried before because it will give me an opportunity to change the world and it will help me to recognize myself.
Above all, people who do not try new things and activities cannot explore new opportunities. It means that if you are doing same thing for many times, result of it will be narrow but just a little improvement on only one task. As an example, taking an information technology as a major, if one person who knows nothing but only one programming language cannot improve himself in this rapidly changing industry so he may stay on one position without any upgrade and even face such bury like being discharged from his job. Additionally, in case of some successful founders of big companies such as Facebook, Google, Tesla motors and Amazon, founders tend to be like intimidated of not trying anything new. Founder of Tesla motors, Ellon musk sacrifices his educational period by implementing many new things like establishing many startups including Paypal and SpaceX in order to seize his every opportunities.
Secondly, one of the main goals of human beings is to discover themselves by trying distinct types of activities and every people on earth are unique and different from each other. It means if we don’t make any mistakes we would remain without knowing anything, including purposes and meaning of life. Once the founder of Apple, Steve Jobs, said that everyone’s life is limited, don’t live someone else’s life by doing things that are not dedicated for you and try everything as much as you can in order to know in what you interested. My own experience is compelling example of it, I spent my university years to executing many new technologies to know if this major is my main concern or not. As a result, I became aware of my interest and setup my future goals.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people should attempt new, unfamiliar and interesting things as possible. Due to the people who don`t endeavor things that they don’t enjoy are guaranteed to fail and waste their life.
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- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 76
- You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice? 76
- how technological advance affect employee? 80
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88729016787 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78560267487 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6354108079 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.866666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162451892665 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659198906931 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069532509717 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110344557836 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286664779413 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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