Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should spend money on things that last a long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, and not spend money on short-term pleasures like vacations.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people prefer to spend money on object things because they state that they see how the money is being spent. However, others think otherwise. They believe that money spent on vacations is worthwhile. In my opinion, people should spend money on short-term pleasures as holidays and vacations . I feel this way because of the following reasons as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, spending money on pleasures is paying off. We cannot scrimp in that occasions because it maybe our time to relex and relieve work stress is worthy. Even though we do not see the money being invested, at least we are having fun. For example, I remember my last vacation when I went to Italy and France. I had a hard time working that during my vacation, my money spent on this trip was so valuable that after finishing it, I wanted to do the travel again. Thereefore, this example illustrates the primordial in spending money on vacation.
Moreover, although we can see the money spent on real objects, it may not be worthwhile. For instance, I remember when I gave an expensive piece of jewelry to my mother and at first she enjoy it a lot, but afterwards, she dismissed it and sold it to my sister for a cheaper price. Thus, this instance ellucidates that sometimes the money spent on superfluous things is not worthy.
Furthermore, it is much better to spend money in merely one day like a holiday than on a piece of an object. As one example, when we had had one hard work week then we grab the holiday and enjoy it in an amusement park where we spend a lot of money. Therefore, this example shows the money worhwhile spent.
Finally, I strongly believe that the money spent on vacations and holidays is much better spent than on a piece of jewelry because we take advantage of the time spent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...term pleasures as holidays and vacations . I feel this way because of the followin...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...f jewelry to my mother and at first she enjoy it a lot, but afterwards, she dismissed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5524691358 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50856237855 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5232748241 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9444444444 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307048281609 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110238200999 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806854098114 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176468694146 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635176380829 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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