Do you agree or disagree with the following statement people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment- doing things things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
is it prudent to say that we should spend our much time on enjoyment ? Two different perspective surface while meticulously evaluating this is issue. One perspective answers aforementioned question in the affirmative with utmost conviction whereas other makes its disapproval evident by denying its presence. Personaly I have proclivity towards thought that we should do the things that are important rather than spending much time of personal enjoyment. Main reason is time management and its consequences.
To live a simple life, good balance between our wishes and priorities should be maintained. Too much enjoyment leaving behind your important things will be disastrous. this can be seen from an Australian young couple left home by selling everything they have to travel world. Within 5 yrs they finished world tour and money stock as well. The question emerges that what happened next ? No traces of their activity found again. In young age they were expected to buy home and build secure future where they can plan their world tour. According to me this decision was taken without considering consequences.
Furthermore personal enjoyment is necessary as it provides break from daily routine. there are other things most important than enjoyment is responsibilities. it must be on to do list. definition of enjoyment is very broad, states that joy coming from pleasing activities. we can feel the list of activity by any incident. Watching few children playing is also type of vicarious type of enjoyment.
Last but not least, enjoyment can be obtained from any simple sources there is no need to ignore what we should be doing. For successful life sometimes working day and night is compulsory. In the end success speaks itself and gives u everlasting enjoyment. Instead of studying if a student start to play video game he will surely fail.Proper studies will lead him to real enjoyment.
Hence after holistic analysis, it is evident that points are in the favor of thought of doing important thing is important and it overpowers the points in favor of other thought with its logic, cogency and rationale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2238372093 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83100267813 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619186046512 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5063373675 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.875 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241273081886 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589619081843 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798918152627 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123619038682 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695126801332 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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