Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend to much time paying attention to the personal lives of celebrities or famous people
With advent of the technology, there are more ways for people to realize and follow the stars or idol such as ins or twitter. Some people hold the view that people today use exceeding attention to the famous people’s personal life. From my personally perspective, paying attention on the star’s live have a positive on people’s life for the following reasons.
Firstly, realizing the famous people’s life inspires people’s motivation. The people who is famous usually have the special characteristic to success. To be more precise, people could learn the positive points in the star or celebrities, which will assist them to face the difficulties and problem in their life. When people find their idol’s action or history that is brave or ambitious, they can have more incentive to fight the challenges. Take myself as an example, my favorite basketball star is Jimmy Butler who has no family and grow up by himself. With the concentrating on his background, I get more motivation when I face the difficulties by thinking how he solve the problem and success.
In addition, concerning celebrities’ personal life help people release the pressure. No matter going to work or attending the class, people are all exposed to a great deal of pressure such as getting up early, finishing the workload in a short time and going to the bed late. Realizing their idol’s life is a good idea to relax. In other words, by observing their idols’ personal life like which restaurant they eating in, which clothes they wearing and which place they taking photos. By doing this, people could follow their idol and do the same thing. After that, they can share the same clothes or same style photo in the social media. It is not only a symbolize to show how they are fond the idol, but also a sense of achieving the small thing to make them happy and relaxed. Therefore, paying attention to the famous people is a good way for people to release the pressure. For example, when my sister gets the same T-shirt of her idol, she is very excited and forget all the upset in school.
Admittedly, there might some disadvantages by paying exceeding attention to the famous people. For example, some people will be waiting for the celebrities around their house to get a signature or concentrate on their love life. It indeed has negative effect on the famous people and deprives of their privacy. However, when we obey the limitation and bottom line of the correct values, following the idol is very helpful for our life and mood.
In summary, paying attention on the star’s live have a positive on people’s life. It is because realizing the famous people’s life inspires people’s motivation and help people release the pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oto in the social media. It is not only a symbolize to show how they are fond the idol, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92872570194 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6434573414 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475161987041 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.691503101 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0833333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320801366638 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115682463206 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100918483981 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228285938879 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909718187437 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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