Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. People today spend so much time doing things they like to do whether than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I completely disagree, nowadays we are so much busy doing things that we really need to do. So, we are putting outside everything that we probably would like to do. Modern society is completely full of tasks and worried about earning money to survive. Usually, most part of the people do not have enough time to think about which they would like do.
In fact, we immerse ourselves in a heavy routine, but unfortunately life it is not forever and we are getting old day by day. For example, I am a P.h.D student and usually I spent most part of my time doing activities related with my research project. But, there are so much things that I want to do in life. Simply things like visit my grandmother, I really miss her so much, but I am not able to travel right now. Also, I would like to read a lot books just for enjoying an amazing read and a lot of other things. Indeed, working like this I usually do not have free time to do what I really appreciate.
Recently, I was reading a newspaper that was discussing about I survey with 70 countries, which stated that seventy percent of the old people around the world have some kind of mental illness caused by their jobs and consequently their lifestyle when they were younger. Interesting when these people was asked a simple question, like : Did you enjoy your life, doing activities that you like? The average answer was: - No, I did not, because I was so busy with my job. Briefly, the researchers conclude that, there was a strong correlation between mental health and a happiness behaviour about doing daily activities.
Perhaps, we did not learn yet, how to live a good life. I mean! Making better decisions, thinking about what we really want for ourselves. For example, my boyfriend always have a to dream take a Bachelor’s degree in Physical Education, but his father currently have a factory of construction and building materials. So, he ended up, taking a degree in Administration to help his father in the business’s family. Unhapelly, he does not like their currently job but a couple of days ago he was thinking about became a Personal Trainer and taking a Bachelor’s degree that he always wanted. I encourage him to do it, because I feel that, we are not getting use to do what really we like.
For those reasons I feel the opposite of the statement. Perhaps we need to take more time with activities that we really would enjoy than just working to earn money for the future. We are losing the path to live an amazing life, just for refuse ourselves to do the things that we like.
- It is very important for students to learn as much as possible before their graduation from university. For this reason, many schools require students to attend all of their classes in person in order to achieve a passing score. Do you agree or disagree 60
- Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. 66
- The prompt: 1. Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with?Give reasons for your choice. 88
- It is very important for students to learn as much as possible before their graduation from university For this reason many schools require students to attend all of their classes in person in order to achieve a passing score Do you agree or disagree with 55
- If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details. 63
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...old day by day. For example, I am a P.h.D student and usually I spent most part o...
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...behaviour about doing daily activities. Perhaps, we did not learn yet, how to li...
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...because I feel that, we are not getting use to do what really we like. For those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, if, really, so, for example, i feel, i mean, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59782608696 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63952585819 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495652173913 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4861436361 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9565217391 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324084523635 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111689153195 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111678476095 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202778578514 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941668273883 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.