Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I think today’s life has been easier and cozy to live than a couple of years ago. Definitely, technology has an important role on this progress, which made life more comfortable. Currently, most part of us do not be able to realize this, but likely our grandparents would be. Activities like, a mobile phone call, paying for bills even at home, buying food, clothes etc. At least a travel could be easier. All those things that most of us considering trivial, our grandparents think it is amazing, for sure!
When I have the opportunity, I like to talk with my grandmother about how everything was fifty years ago. I ask her if she is looking at a big difference, between today and when she was a kid. She is always surprised myself, telling me a lot storytelling about her life. For example, my brother live in Portugal and last year we take a trip to visit him. We went to the airport, took the plane and in few hours we could arrive in Portugal. My grandma was impressed because we travel far and quickly. The travel was so fasted, she was taking a nape and when woke up we was already in there. When she was eight and needed to travel to a capital city nearby for buy fabric to sew family clothes. <span style="font-size: 1.1em;">Considering a good day, she could spend almost ten hours traveling in a terrible bus. Undoubtedly todays we have transportation facilities more suitable to short and long travels around the world.</span><div>Nowadays, we have the internet since them everything became easier. We can communicate with anyone around the world, learning new things even at home, solve financial problems, watching movies and listening to music to have fun and a bunch of other things. For instance, when my grandfather was a kid he needed to walk almost seven kilometers just to arrived at school. Of course, he got tired, likewise it was hard to focus on classes. Today everything is easier. Also, he told me that how he did not have a computer to use the internet to study, he needed to brough with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any choice, he states.
In conclusion, I feel that we are making everything is possible to become life more practical and comfortable to live. It is impressive how we change a lot of things in a few times. Actually I am happy because my grandparents are still alive to live all enjoyable things we create.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1548, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...ugh with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, likewise, look, so, still, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64651162791 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08436364273 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3792904308 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.92 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113843347788 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340797067901 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298099647898 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696716744595 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212378938666 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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