Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person who plans well and works carefully is more likely to succeed than a person who takes risks.
it goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where the technology and competitive condition in order to reach success is growing so fast, all of the people work hard to become successful. A controversial question is often raised regarding this issue that individuals by taking a risk can achieve success or by planning and working carefully. Some experts argue that giant successes need risk and they mention some successful persons to support their opinions. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that plan well and works carefully is the reliable way and certainly, have a successful result. I support my viewpoint with two reasons.
First of all, if individuals take the risk in their works, it is possible that they encounter with fail and their time and invests waste. On the other hand, if individuals schedule and work carefully, they ensure that reach to their goals and in fact, they opt the reliable way in order to become successful. Hence, individuals which have a scheme for the whole of the process of their work, they won't face with unpredictable drawbacks and they are aware of all of the actions which they should do for reaching to success. on the other hand, for example, I have e failure experience, I participated in the project and I take the risk and I buy all of the stocks of the company and after six months the price of stocks reduce and I encounter with irrecoverable fail. Therefore, it is important that individuals have the miraculous scheme for their works and decrease risks of the work.
Furthermore, if individuals take risk and face with fail, it is possible that they lose own highly motivated and do not continue to reach their goal. But if individuals have a schedule for their work and they work carefully, they even have the solution for these situations and they work constantly. for instance, now, I materializing the digital marketing project for increasing the sale of my company, so because I have a precise plan and working carefully, I can predict all of the situations which I encounter with and I have the particular solution for them and this leads to my success certainly in the long run. Then, having an accurate plan and working miraculously make individuals sure during the process.
To sum up, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that we can become successful by having a reliable plan and endeavoring carefully. In addition, in this way, we can have a sure sense and become relax during the work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86588235294 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84437014513 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454117647059 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9503897076 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1875 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120417925991 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527956739775 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256742163115 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813177654693 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331960043485 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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