When making major purchase (for example, car or laptop), our decisions can be influenced by different sources of information. Explain how each of the following sources of information can influence your decision. (1) Recommendations from friends or colleagues (2) Information from media (for example, TV, magazines, newspapers) (3) Recommendations from sales person in the store.
First of all, we trust our friends and we know that they bought their purchase by investing and personal experience. So, they can recommend our trusty. In addition, our friends also speak about the weakness of the purchase during our daily speaking and if their views are compatible with each other, we can according to their commendation make the decision for the best purchase. For example, I decided to buy a cellphone and I request views of some my friend and in this manner, I could have the best opting and I now satisfy from my chose. Furthermore, our friend aware of our economic condition and according to it can have a proper suggestion. So, the recommendation from friends is the best way for purchase.
Furthermore, nowadays there are so many companies which in order to increase their sales spend much money on advertising on the television or newspaper and social media. They carry out diverse campaigns in society to attract the trust of people and by repetition positive features in the television and newspaper, individuals' minds become convinced that this brand is the best among others. For instance, Golrang company materialize so many campaigns in society such as protect exercisers, protect environment campaign, and healthy lifestyle campaign and attract attention people and newspapers. Then newspapers publish these events and support its' brand. In addition, some companies are the sponsor of newspapers or some televisions show and they advertise for their sponsor to compensate companies' spending.
Last but not least, salesperson definitely advertises their goods and it is possible that they in order to increase their sales tell about their purchase untrusty. Moreover, sometimes the sale persons have limit information and they are aware just about their commodities or they work for a specific company and them sales just good of that company. Then, they cannot give true information. Moreover, some companies produce diverse products which different brands and sales their product in the chain shops and sales all of their products is beneficial.
To sum up, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that among the above ways to acquire information about purchases, the recommendation from friends is the best way. However, some people use three ways and then make the decision to buy their purchase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80933840458 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.729418602 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.470588235 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14969638254 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598485212016 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572438757711 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934532167269 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854918049791 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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