Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that professional athletes are born with talent.You cannot train someone to be a professional athlete.Give reasons and examples.
In today’s world everyone has unique skills and talents and that is what makes each one of us special.People realize their talent at different stages in their lives.Parents and teachers play a key role in helping children discover their potentials.
There are various perspectives regarding the role of talent in achieving success.In my opinion,besides talent Passion and Dedication play a vital role to achieve professional standards.Many sports persons have failed in their initial stages of career but with sheer Determination they were able to win many laurels.Forinstance,MICHAEL JORDAN was dropped from the high school basket ball team, due to lack of talent .But now everyone knows him .If Talent alone played an important role to become a professional , we wouldn’t have had well known sports persons.
In addition,For a talent to develop into skill ,requires passion and continuous practice.Tocite,a person might be good at running but to compete with other professional athletes requires Hard work and never give-up attitude.One must put in hardwork to harvest and cultivate their talent.without hard work ,talent is meaningless.
To conclude , becoming a professional in any field requires the desire to learn and passion towards it.Ibelieve in the saying”HARDWOK BEATS TALENT WHEN TALENT FAILS TO WORK HARD”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66831683168 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67050169058 2.67179642975 137% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.136158313 48.9658058833 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.25 100.406767564 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.5 20.6045352989 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.45110844103 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152009216509 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915593744652 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404131192257 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915593744652 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404131192257 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 11.7677419355 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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