it goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens, live in an age when our lifestyle has undergone profound changes and became more sophisticated. by this definition, the swift and monumental scientific and technological achievements have triggered the emergence of countless trades and corporations. Indeed, those who can be surf on this huge wave and become a successful enrepenoure or manager that hear others voice and share them on the chief decisions. the following essay takes an elaborating look at whether is it helpuf to having others viewpoint or not.
there is no denying that consultation is an aaccepted rule that boosts to have broad vision and diminish the probable confronting problems. In fact, one person could not attain every human science especially in the current time, so we indispensiably forced to employ skilled and expertists in attributng field. there is a Persian quteation that says ''one hande does not have sound'' or in some other where it sayes ''we cannt land on moon unless public help''. For instance, suppose a leader of montain climbing leader, during the rise there may occure some occurence the no solution comes on mied of leader but someone in the group previously experienced it. thus the idea of that individual would be remedial.
admittedly, doing arbitrarily in critical situations would lead destructive results. indeed, this type of behavior on the policy is named dictatorship. undoubtedly, the history has shown that the nations in which the leader has the sense of superiority the and repudiates others idea ensue unpleasent results. A group of sociologists and psychologists carried ou an investigation to find out the reason of successful peoples. ultimately they anncounced that the only reason is using others idea.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we can reach a conclusive conclusion that the leaders should not use others idea they certainly exerted other advice that could become prospersed.
- Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People would be happier withfewer possessions. 78
- Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation:1. good food 2. good location 3. good friends to travel with. Select one and giveyour reasons. 81
- Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office. Which do you prefer and why 83
- Agree or disagree Movies and TV programs made in your own country are more interesting comparing to movies and programs made in other countries 64
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26582278481 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99498191648 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4480900467 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121073228902 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343511595706 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327233773893 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741512604644 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205618993642 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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