it goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens, live in an age when our lifestyle has undergone profound changes and became more sophisticated. by this definition, the swift and monumental scientific and technological achievements caused that youngers face wtih the different challanges regarding their occupations. indeed the type of these challenges are mostly tied with hectic civilized life, where the type of challenges mostly attributed to the simple peasent life. the following essay takes an elaborating look at how youngers concerns fiffer by the passage of time.
there is no denying that youngers nowadayes experiences more stresses to fine a desired job related to their educations. whereas, previously the number of youthes with academic education was handful in each town. moreover, their literacy was not for finding job, just for doing daily tasks; so the problem of being employ automaticaly cancels. in fact, in ancient time people mostly struggle with one problem and that was working on the agrarian grounds inherited from ancestors. conversel, the chief concerns of young people today are education, gaining experience in one of fileds, finding job, earning money, buying car and home and getting married.
in additon, modern life has introduced other concepts like fation, health care and entertaimnt. these factors each one turned to the concerns of youner individuals. for instance, to keeping their body shape in good form ad not getting obecity they prevent eating oily and fastfoods. also they join gyms or body buildings saloons to be in good shape and be attractive to opposit sex. moreover, the entertaiment industry become more interesting for youthes and they try to be unique in spesific context.
to wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we can reach a conclusive conclusion. in fact, the most outstanding difference between challenges of present youthes and past youngers is stress.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 88
- Which of the following would you most like to change to improve your health? The kind of food you eat, the amount of exercise or the level of stress. 78
- Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Younger school student children (age five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math science, history, and language. 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has. 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40789473684 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85253325719 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661184210526 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7130196949 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.75 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164358328421 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414682672097 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507626026697 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865691281673 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430193802973 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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