Nowadays, the issue of how to determine the teacher’s salary has been a hot-debated one. Hence, it is imperative for governments to find solutions to this issue. There have already been many diversified principles and forms, with many people taking the attitude that teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform. As far as I am concerned, if I were the decision maker, I would definitely be in favor of this proposal.
Admittedly, it is understandable that some people concern this proposal may yield some counterproductive results. This may press the teachers too hard to lose confidence in their teaching method and have adverse effects on the competition between them. One the one hand, some teachers may be unwilling to teach classes with more low-level students. On the other hand, the teaches may ignore their students’ inner voice and psychological conditions, with most attention on their grades and behaviors in school.
However, students will receive more attention from their teachers because of this motion. Behavior is the mirror of one’s mind. To improve students’ behavior, teachers must propose two-side communication with them. Only putting in others’ shoes, can the teachers find out the real problems plaguing their kids and dealing with them from the root. Imagine such a scene, if a student is always stealing money, on no account should the teacher ignore such thing on the grounds that he is paid according to the students’ behavior. After finding that the student’s family is very needy and parents have little time to accompany with him, and the teacher will give him more warmth and prevent him from going to the wrong direction of his life.
In addition, this proposal is considerably conducive to the teachers, and urge them to enhance their teaching efficiency. Usually, salary is the crucial determinant of stimulus that improves the quality of his work. When teachers are encouraged according to his students’ behavior, he will acknowledge that every single drop of his sweat pays back. Such outcomes reflect positively upon teachers; they will be committed to the education career more industriously, thus be equipped with advanced education approaches. However, if a teacher’s salary is determined by others aspects instead of their students’ behavior such as the time of their career or how many essays they publicized, his brain will be stuffed with those elements rather than the students.
In sum, I can safely draw a conclusion that it is sensible to pay the teachers according to the students’ behaviors. In opposition to the ideas that it may be detrimental to both teachers and students, this proposal can promote the teaching method and give rise to the care for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29596412556 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02932638642 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522421524664 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7503706597 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.476190476 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288812060267 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904752377048 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820420538549 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175735256809 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603014883489 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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