Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five)
should not be allowed.”
Whether television advertising directed toward young children who are aged between 2 and 5 should be allowed, or should not has been a controversial issue in the community recently. In this particular, people has differing ideas. While some believe that it has some risks some argue that it creates numerous benefits.From my point of view it provides children with several social and educational advantages that must be considered. I will reveal my point of view in the following paragraphs with concrete detail and examples.
Children who aged between 2 and 5, meet other people through television advertising after their family and neighborhood. This visual product acts as a bridge between the world and children. This might show various ways.So, the children learn a lot of things about the world outside.Furthermore, they need rich visual content to improve their imagination and creation. They should not be deprived of these requirements.
Children are well affected by television advertising, especially about educational matters. They contain almost every information about science, math, biology etc.. and the children take advantage of it. In those ages(between 2-5) they can not read or study, they only hear and watch but mostly watch. When a younger watch an advertisement he/she would curious about the content.Moreover, they can recognize the difference between real world and television. In this point, the television advertisements with music, color and acting; shape their mind very well.
Some people claim that the television advertisements are harmful for children. In their words their aim is not suitable. however, i am largely at variance with these statements. According to a research, the children who grow with visual tools mostly be more creative than others. Without it, there is no chance for them to meet new things and help their imagination.
As a result, television advertising has many educational and social benefits for children. It is must be in their lives and it helps them learn, create, imagine in these ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3487654321 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03185564986 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5187783631 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5238095238 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244069993775 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732319035962 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765002343062 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14030429278 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568013399897 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.