Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
advantages and disadvantages of reading only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts has been a controversial issue in the community recently.In this particular, people have differing ideas. While some think that this behavior creates some advantages, others argue that it has a number of risks. From my point of view, this opinion offers several educational and psychological disadvantages that should be considered. I will clarify my opinion with concrete detail and examples in the following paragraphs.
people do not need only reality in books but also they need to leave this world for a while.people who just read those books which involve only real experiments, real people and real events, they will lose their imagination at the end. without imagination we are not different from robots.Furthermore, fiction is a part of life as reality. fiction provides us to reach reality.
The books which have only a real context are not enough for infinite potential of evolution. Human race and his community always improve and always raise. that means we can not keep improving without other components.Moreover, reality prevents us from doing something different. we can see that it is like a jail for our minds.
Supporters of the opinion that people should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts argue that without reality , this world and our lives become meaningless. I am entirely at variance with this statement. Their reality comment is missing. Even if it is true, we are the ones who create reality and materials about it. facts are created with fiction and imagination.
Consequently, people should not read only those books that about real people and established facts. other books which is not about only real people or reality will be helpful for their education and psychology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22112211221 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9295676626 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.8459957715 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420801933079 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124426385205 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149466747595 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261367980137 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110476649461 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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