Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Over the last few decades, development of technology has great impact in people’s life. It makes our life quicker and more comprehensive and havegreat advantage in our life.one of this technology is television. some people always debate about televisions negative impact in familie’s communication.I basically disagree with this view because of two reason.
First, collecting family member one of the great advantages of the television. television bring together family members alongside each other to watch favor program and movies or serials. if the television don’t have programs, films or something like that, everyone is looking for different entertainment for themselves to spend their time. compelling example, in my family if television haven’t any program and films or etc. everyone remove their one phone and surfing in websites an application like Instagram or Facebook or something like that to spend their time with as low as possible communication.
Second, television also increase good public information and family discussion about everythings . I said good and safe information because television has sophisticated supervisor that make all dialogues and programs suitable for all family member and parents can be comfortably imagined assemble and discuss about good information like answer the question asked in the TV shows and programs like survivur that make a sense of competition between family member to discuss with each other about their favorable team. this cause to increase communication between family members without out any age limits
Generally speaking, as we discuss above, television has more positive impact in communication between family member for example make challeng between all member family about programs. Next, assemble family members alongside each other. Nowadays majority of people due to some technology tend to increase communication with each other. I hope, that human learn to use any technology in a useful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77483443709 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99923200312 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.2561686335 48.9658058833 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902886495584 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355797185457 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364970360011 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588438363812 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468803254072 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 10.9000537634 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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