Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Though people already realized the importance of protecting the environment, it's unlikely that there'll be any difference.
Protecting the environment will take a long time so there may not be any difference so far. But I think in few years, a huge change will take place in the environment. At that time, people will live in a comfortable environment full of beautiful plants and cute animals.
First, planting trees and setting up new park in the cities will spend some time. As we know, a tree have to take three or four years even decade to grow up. During these years, trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen through a process called photosynthesis. Therefore, the atmosphere will become much fresher and cleaner. In addition, it is very complicated to build a park in the city. First of all, the government allows the company to build a park in a certain place. Then, the landscape architects and engineers design the park. At last, workers have to spend two or more years to construct the park. Thus, people cannot tell the differences in a short time but the environment is getting better actually.
Second, not everyone has awareness about the importance of protecting the environment so the government and schools need to spend a number of time teaching people to improve their consciousness of preserving the environment. However, just having the awareness is not enough, people have to form habits in daily life. For example, people through the trash into the trash can and classify them intentionally. Besides, people are able to save water and papers consciously. Every person does these little things everyday will make the environment better gradually. As a result, the environment does have some changes during the few years.
Finally, the government and factories have noticed that it is important to protect the environment. Accordingly, they put a lot of efforts to find new energy resources. As we know, researching the clean new energy resources is very time-consuming. Only money is not enough, researchers have to spend lots of time doing experiments and surveys. Besides, they have to invent equipments to exploit these new energy resources. When these things all finished, people cannot see any difference soon because there still are some energy resources which will produce carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide and nitrogen monoxide in the air. Therefore, there are differences taken place in people’s living condition.
Clearly, as the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious that there are some differences happened and the environment become greater gradually. Because people already realized the importance of preserving the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
.... Every person does these little things everyday will make the environment better gradua...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e environment become greater gradually. Because people already realized the importance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19082125604 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86919209826 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6744046824 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5925925926 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40740740741 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109473332032 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333010537774 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561075192932 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765479904519 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407015830414 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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