Do you agree or disagree with the following opinion? The most important goal of education is to help people educate themselves?
Education entails plenty of aspects such as moral education, law education and academic study, but all of them cannot be achieved by self-education. Therefore, I totally disagree with that helping people educate themselves is the most important goal of education.
First, people should obey the law in their own country and the way of learning to be a good citizen cannot be taught by themselves. Therefore, the purpose of eduction system is to teach people to be a good citizen. Without law, people do not define what is wrong and what is right. Before 2011, people did not think it was a big deal if they drove after drinking alcohol. However, there were lots of car accidents taking thousands of people’s lives because of drunk driving actually. Thus, the legislation committee representing the whole citizens established a strict law to prohibits people from drunk driving. That is to say, People will be in the prison for a half year if they are caught drunk driving after the.There is a huge gap between the legislation and people putting it into practice. Although there is a law, people still cannot educate themselves to obey the new law. Thus, there are some special organizations settled in the police stations to teach drivers who behave badly. Clearly, how can people notice the importance of driving without drinking by themselves.
Besides the education of law, another aspect of education is the manner education which people can not teach themselves. So people learn manners from their parents since they were little kids. It is obvious that people do not know how to be polite by themselves. When I was able to talk, my mother always asked me to say hello to my elders such as my aunt, grandmother and grandfather. In addition, after I entering kindergarten, my mother also told me that I should be nice to my classmates and respect teachers. But at first, I didn’t understand why I should do this. To my surprise, after a period of time, I found that I have made some friends and my teachers thought I was a good girl and they very liked me. Thanks to my mother, I learned how to be polite to others, which I can not teach myself.
In conclusion, self-education might be important in our lives, but it is not the most important goal of education, since there are always some knowledge that we are not able to understand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75931549431 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5085995086 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1471800155 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.380952381 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260391225075 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087983812782 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123456777664 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200467529996 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102154951703 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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