Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: black; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Introduction, I support this idea that in twenty years there will be
fewer cars in use than there are today. I believe that humans always want to
develop and to ease their lifestyle then they have to figure the best way out
because they want to do a comfortable and convenient life. In the case of
transportation, I agree with the statement that today humans attempt to produce
higher car than before and they use a lot of cars which is not in use last
time. In this essay, I want to describe my idea into three reasons include
transportation and facilitation with a car, energy and time-consuming these
days, </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">the development
of</span> science and technology. First of all, one of the most
important reason in the case of transportation is the issue of energy and
time-consuming. The history of transportation started from humans decided to
use for transported everything by animals such as horse, donkey and so on but
they couldn’t carry heavy things and they weren’t fast and consuming energy a
lot. As a result, human developed in from agriculture to industrialization.
Therefore, cars replace animals. After that human invited bicycle for
transportation which <span class="hiddengrammarerror">is used</span> in some countries.
For instance, a car is necessary for women, who need to have a car because they
are a situational shopper who spends a long time shopping because they don’t
want to shop. Therefore, they should have a car because they don’t know how
much time will spend in the shop. For example, ten years ago, I went into a car
store for buying and I was in search of one modern car. In fact, I thought that
it would make my transportation easier than walking. Eventually, I just bought
on impulse, I couldn’t stop myself. I am not the kind of person who shops till
they drop. Second, on the one hand, <span class="hiddengrammarerror">the development of</span> science and
technology caused to expand a lot of cars in the world. On the other hand,
these develop to cause making a lot of carbon dioxide gas and methane gas which
<span class="hiddengrammarerror">are provided</span> by cars and that causes pollution in the air and green gas.
I’ve heard a lot of news about climate change in the world. I believed that <span class="hiddengrammarerror">the production
of</span> automobiles in the industrialization era cause to pollute
the planet earth and changing the weather. Third, in my opinion, humans produce
cars and automobiles for spending time on one of the most important issues in
the world such as saving time and energy but they don’t struggle to keep the
environment and nature in the best condition. Although, time and energy are
more important than other things in the world they have not to keep in their
minds to protect the nature
of the earth as well as pastime. In conclusion, I think that changing
agriculture to industrialization in the world cause a lot of advantage and
disadvantage for human in terms of pollutions and deforestation and climate
change. In fact, the modernization in the world causes to ease life and it’s not
perfect but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a result, I believe
that increase automobiles and machines is inevitable because humans don’t have
a long life and they must save their energy and time for research and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3568.0 1977.66487455 180% => OK
No of words: 587.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07836456559 4.8611393121 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.56629218694 2.67179642975 283% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458262350937 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1050.3 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.843049215 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4583333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 46.0 4.53405017921 1015% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240289685822 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733469629947 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589399076459 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545785519187 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581534929494 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.28 10.9000537634 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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