Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both reasons against and in favor of the idea that there will be fewer cars in the future. but if I were forced to choose, I would definitely disagree with this statement. it is my firm belief that there will be fewer cars in the future than today for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas is the subsequent paragraph.
First of all, due to the improved technologies public transportation systems have improved and their benefits become more attractive for people. On the other hand the disadvantages of driving a car, like hours of traffic and high gas costs may drive some people to think about alternatives. Not to mention the many changes of globalization, which makes life highly fast paced and thereby time extremely important, almost too important to waste it with driving a car. While public transportations offer tremendous assets. For example, you can use your time on the bus or train for other things, like work or to relax a minute. Of course, technologies like self driving cars or electro car are in development, but drawing from my experiences, this improvements might need more time than two decades to evolve. In addition, such cars will be fare more expensive and a lot of people tend to choose cheaper public transportations over them.
Secondly, ecological and environmental mindsets increase all around the world. The attention of a huge group of people rise towards protecting and preserving nature. Therefore more and more humans try to reduce their carbon footprint, and a great way to do so is reducing the usage of cars. Moreover resources like gas are rarely limited and might someday be used up. Especially in younger generations this mindset seem develop, which can be concluded from all those protests like “Fridays for future”.
I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experiences. you see, in high school almost every student in the graduating classes had a drivers license, but instead of driving all alone by ourselves, we used to carpool and organized groups from the same direction to share a car. As a result we minimized the amount of gas we would had used and it was even much more fun, because we had the chance to spend time with our friends in the cars before school.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that in twenty year numbers of cars in use will decrease in contrast to today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, of course, as a result, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81882352941 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73059406442 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583529411765 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.902009419 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.789473684 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52631578947 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249403123261 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690203453495 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653799578799 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150295551705 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774135430462 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.