Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of this statement. But if I were forced to choose, I would definitely disagree with this statement. it is my firm believe that it is really important for people to focus on themselves especially nowadays, for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
first of all our way of living has changed drastically over the last decade due to the globalization and improved technologies. A lot of people struggle with this fast paced life and have issues to cope with all this changes. it makes it more important for humans to take some time off and focus on their well being, before they might develop mental illnesses. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced on my own personal experiences. You see last year I made an internship in an mental health department, and illnesses like burn outs or depressions increased over the last several year, because people have to face a high pressure to perform in this society.
For this reason, I think it is really important some spend time on personal enjoyment.
Secondly, personal fullfillment is the highest achievement of humans in our society and experiencing joy, is an important goal of life. life is all about opportunities we did not take and to avoiding those regrets, I think people should spend more time on their interests in order to be happy and grow on a personal level. Drawing from my experiences, it is clear to see why I hold this point of view. When I attended high school, I laid my focus mainly on studying and missed out on some few typical experiences. While my fellow students first goal was having fun, I learned for my exams and took myself under pressure to get good grades. However, I regret not taking some opportunities.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that people should spend their time to achieve their personal goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71827937902 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7639643017 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979269586838 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340318593518 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318225976203 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688154869452 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019077535338 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.