Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Automobile has a great impact in our daily life. Although, some people believe that number of cars on road will be reduced in coming years, however, I think it is just the opposite. I firmly believe this way because of a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, automobile has immensly improved the transportation system and made our life a way easier. Current job market is highly competitive and everyone is so busy in this rat race. People always try not to waste their precious time wasting by travelling in a public transport. As a result, they are getting more inclined to buy their own private car and that will not only reduce their travelling time, but also make it a way comfortable. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, just after my graduation, I got a job in a mnc as a software developer and initially, I used to avail public transports and consequently, I needed almost total of 4 hours on my way and moreover, I used to get too tired. Hence I decided to purchase my own car and which I used to drive on the way and was able to reduce the time to travel to only 3 hours. For this reason, I think if I would have never bought my personal car, I might have lost some of my precious time wasting on road.
Secondly, I think due to current economical pressure, automobile companies are usually setting less price for cars which enables its reach to middle class people. Drawing from my personal experience, when I bought my first car, I used to get only 5 lpa anually, but with this money, I couldn't able to afford to buy a even a 1bhk house near my office. Hence, after considering certain factors, I found buying a car would be more cheaper than a house. Moreover, with the new technological advancement, there are a few mobile applications through which every car owner can do car pooling and I used to utilize that to take care of the fuel cost. Therefore, it is certainly clear that, I had took a correct decision and that in turn supports my point.
In light of the above mentioned passages, I strongly believe that number of cars will increase in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
... precious time wasting by travelling in a public transport. As a result, they are getting more inc...
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Line 3, column 780, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... and moreover, I used to get too tired. Hence I decided to purchase my own car and wh...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...y 5 lpa anually, but with this money, I couldnt able to afford to buy a even a 1bhk hou...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... money, I couldnt able to afford to buy a even a 1bhk house near my office. Hence...
^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
... factors, I found buying a car would be more cheaper than a house. Moreover, with the new te...
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Line 5, column 689, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...fore, it is certainly clear that, I had took a correct decision and that in turn sup...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49875930521 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6566841975 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7922114704 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164024058742 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504894993377 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394974496567 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982668696831 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337819050106 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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