Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are some argument about the amount of money should be received. Some people believe that sport and social activities are just important as science and general konwladge classes at univerisities, and they should have an equal financial support. However, other poeple dispute this argument, they see the sport and scoial activities should receive less amount of money than classes and libraries. Thus, this money must spent more on libraries and clases. In my opinion, I believe that both are just important for the following reasons.
Firstly, if less money spends on the social activities and sports, students will be unexperienced in socializing with the community. Also, less sport for student may will affect their health and fitness. In result, the next generation of students will face some significant issues in their life. In addition, some of them may face difficulties in making new friends and get depressed and that will affect their health too.
Secondly, people agreed on the importance of classes and libraries qualites for students. The absence of them will lead the student to gain less knowledge which is important for their career. Also, less knowladged students will lead the countries to high unemployment rates and unstable economy.
To conclude, both sport and social skill are just important as classes and libraries. They both should receive the same amount of money, because both are important for students. I believe that goverment should make a system for the amont of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30991735537 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58561812296 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0624997375 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227801432747 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822640179211 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896778518854 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137193713682 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884681606094 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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