Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the prevalence of quality-oriented education, more and more people believe that schools should teach not only knowledge but also interpersonal skills to prepare students for society. while some may insist that students should focus solely on their academic performances as these are their primary responsibility, I agree with the statement that sports and social activities are of equal importance as classes and libraries and should be granted equal financial support.
However, some dissenters may declare that the university students should prioritize their academic work. Since these students have strenuous tasks to complete in order to fulfill their units to graduate, they should not be distracted by sports or social activities. although it is undeniably true that academics are important, I maintain that sports and social activities are just as important. this is because university students would not be able to flourish in the society with professional knowledge only, and sports and social activities can equip them with necessary physical conditions and soft skills to better prepare them for society. hence, sports and social activities are just as important and should be invested as much as classes and libraries.
First of all, the significance of sports and social activities is demonstrated in improving students’ physical and mental health. In today’s increasingly competitive society, students are usually under tremendous pressure from their academies. In this sense, sports and social activities offer an opportunity for students to engage in exercise and socialization, which help to relieve their stress and anxiety. As such, students can return to their work rejuvenated and can better concentrate on their tasks, hence achieving higher productivity. For example, my roommate, Anna, always goes to the gym in our campus after a day’s lectures, and she feels that exercising makes her mind clearer and helps her to study more efficiently. therefore, I believe that sports and social activities are an indispensable part of university students’ life and should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries.
Besides, sports and social activities are important in the sense that they equip university students with essential soft skills. while engaging in team sports or socialization, students will inevitably interact with other people. In the process of interactions, students will unconsciously sharpen their soft skills, such as communication and cooperation skills, for the realization of higher communication efficiency. these skills are extremely important for university students as these skills can enhance their performances in their job interviews and increase their competitiveness to a great extent. For instance, my cousin John used to be the captain of the football team in his university. this experience shaped his leadership characters which later deeply impressed his interviewees and made him a desirable job applicant to a few companies. this exemplifies the significance of sports and social activities in aiding university students’ personal development and improving their prospects, and they should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries.
In conclusion, although classes and libraries are of undeniable importance to university students, sports and social activities are also as important for they help to enhance students’ health and develop students’ soft skills. therefore, the investment in sports and social activities should be increased to the same standard as classes and libraries. Hopefully, with the quality-oriented education, more university students can become all-round talents and flourish in today’s society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 13.8261648746 282% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3191.0 1977.66487455 161% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79128856624 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11803388413 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444646098004 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8937244843 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.739130435 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9565217391 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278199252209 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103627390428 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102379220654 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197016516121 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336769215211 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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