Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
The issue stated by the topic is whether or not a university education should be provided free to all that interested. This is a very important issue because the cost of education is rising and because education is very important. However, I believe that universities should not give an education for free.
I do not think that university education should be free because who is going to pay for it if the students do not? If the government has to pay for it then that means taxes are raised. This is not fair to the people because if they have to pay higher taxes they might not want to go to the university. That means they are paying for something they won’t even use, which is not fair.
Furthermore, I don’t think university education should be free because universities that have more money can give better education. The only way for the universities to get more money is to charge the students. If the education is free, how will the universities get money to buy computers, books, and hire good professors to teach? For this reason, we should not have a free university.
Finally, I think the university should not be free because there are many schools available and they have different prices. Poor students can go to a school that doesn’t cost as much and still learn a lot. Also, many universities give aid or scholarships so a student can attend even if they don’t have money. So there is no need to make a university education free.
In conclusion, university education should not be made free. I believe this because the colleges need the money to make them better. If the universities are free, taxes will be raised and people will have to pay for things they might not use. Since there are many schools available with scholarships and ais, university should not be made free.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue stated by the topic is whether or not a university education should be provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74842767296 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72525963343 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408805031447 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7808119855 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4736842105 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25853056908 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109028590197 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873028851591 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172604833852 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563321370483 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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