Group and organizations are an important part of some people's live. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reaons and examples to explain your answer.
Sociability is an essential characteristic of the human being because we can create groups of a high level of organization needed to develop relationships crucial for our lives. I believe there are plenty of reasons to explain the relevance of groups or organizations in our society, some of them I will present in the following paragraphs.
First of all, from the beginning of our lives, we belong to a group, called the core of society by some sociologists, which is the family. It is the most important group to which we belong. Although nowadays the diversity of families is greater than some centuries ago, it is still the basic unit of society. This fact may be explained that it is in our nature to belong to a group. We share similar characteristics with the other members of the group and many similarities. For instance, a family has the same blood, many common biological features, and physical appearance too. Additionally, members of the same family tend to practice the same religion and have a similar political ideology. To be specific, if you were born in a communist family, it is likely that you will be a communist too, or at least you will be communist friendly. Nevertheless, there might be huge exceptions.
Second, common beliefs make people gather together to support a specific lifestyle or ideology. Religious groups are known worldwide. For instance, Catholics are one of the most large, if not the largest, religious group in the world. They believe in God, adore Jesus as the son of God, and recognize the authority of the Pope, who is the Bishop of Rome. Despite the different opinions about current controversial topics among the people who practice this doctrine, they feel identified to this universal church which, according to them, was founded by Christ himself. So, active members gather every Sunday in the Holy Mass, and do diverse charity works for the poor, to name some examples.
Thirdly, people like to regularly practice group activities which they enjoy. For example, young men who love soccer in my neighborhood gather together at the soccer field every other day to play. So, they have created a group called Eduadiños to participate in competitions with other teams.
In summary, people create groups to belong to a community and do activities together which can be explained by ways of thinking, entertainment, and others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, thirdly, at least, for example, for instance, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01763224181 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87817077986 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541561712846 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9450421352 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212214274885 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656425799208 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576316062895 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12304946281 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358603784882 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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