Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, research showed that by developing the technology youth is the most significant time of people's life and thus young people are an inevitable factor in the success of a society. Some people might have the opinion that young people have no effect on important decisions, while others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that young people have a profound effect on the future of society as a whole because of two reasons. They have the specific ability which is helpful for them and they have more willingness to do activities.
Various skills of young people are the first reason of current discussion. In this regard, it should be noted that for making a decision, we need to have different abilities. With this in mind, we would say that young people can make a decision since they have a fresh brain and they are hardworking. In other words, because of a fresh brain which young people have, they can easily process the data and analyze them. On the other side, by having the young power, they work harder than others and spend more time on different subjects and thus they will reach the result they want. Therefore, young people have a substantial impact on important decisions for the future of society.
Another noteworthy reason is about willingness. In this case, it seems logical to say that if we have enough willing to do works, we will be successful finally. Because of their age, young people have more tendency to do activities rather than old people. By having this tendency, not only they won't be a disappointment when they make a mistake in their job, but also they will get more energy to solve the problems. On the other side, by having this willing, they like to have new information about different topics and being up to date. Hence, young people are deserved to make a decision about their future society.
In conclusion, we reach the consensus that young people not only have enough skills but also have more willing rather than other ages to do activities which help them to have an influence on important decisions. It is worth noting that by mixing the young capable with experience in our works, we will get a positive result on the future of our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve result on the future of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72750642674 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47090109035 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452442159383 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2753810364 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252177614451 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104177166252 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635190121885 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182915036479 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499994751787 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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