Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because
they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking
Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We live in a sophisticated world in which science and technology have become
an inalienable part of our life. Some people believe that new technologies have
eased the way children are being educated, while other people disagree with this
idea. I am of the opinion that technology is of great importance for children
education. In the following essay, I will explore why I feel this way.
To begin with, technological devices could facilitate learning. Indeed, there are
a lot of devices and tools such as smart-phones, social networking websites,
online games, etcetera that could help children to learn new experience that
children in the past were not able to. For example, take my little brother who is
fifteen. Thanks to access the various technological tools such as smart-phones
or personal computer that my father has provided, my brother spend more than
six hours each day playing games and searching on the internet. Not only his
English language has improved during these years, but also he has learned a lot
of knowledge about different topic. I can consider when I was a 10 years old
kid, I had not access smartphones or internet. When it comes to compare my
brother as a fifteen years old kid with myself when I was a kid, I really
understand that his knowledge about different areas is more than me at the age
of fifteen.
Moreover, computer games could help kids to have an active mind. Indeed,
since kids had no access to online games in the past, they were not able to think
critically. My little brother, as I mentioned in the first paragraph, could be a
compelling example of this. As I told, he spends about six hours each day
dealing with technological devices to play games that could help him to think
critically about different situation he is dealing with in the computer games.
Hence, all these games act as an exercise for his brain which could help my
brother to have an agile mind. I think so because he sometimes come up with
new idea which render me to believe he is really of a powerful mind. Had not he
played online games, he would not have been able to have such convincing
ideas.
In conclusion, I believe that educating children are easier nowadays when it
compared to the past. This is because newly available tools that kids in the past
did not access them have provided children with practical ways to improve their
knowledge, and because playing games makes them have more creative mind
than kids in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86013986014 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59234708702 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494172494172 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0947458178 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.53405017921 706% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14224319335 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435170677148 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345136766634 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040155363088 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330325729996 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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