Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
All people requires the guidance and suggestion, to begin something in their life, for success. Exception may be counted as they are some people in the world who made success alone from their own determination or being heterodox. However, in general people mainly need advise from the most seasoned person. people in the past were more presevering in nature and have to deal with more hardship problem than todays; but, todays kids does not have that kind of skills as compared to our ancestor due to their no experience in that area. In my view, the young people in the past were more better decision maker than todays's young genertaion; in what follows, I will generate my pinpoint conspicuous reasons to justify my view.
The first exquiste point to be included is that the young people before this generation were getting involved in the responsibity from their early time. facing the hardship may made them very wise and proficient in the decision making. On the other hand, the kids of today barely come out form their mother lap and their father arm; they depend every thing from the parents. From the larger problems to very minute aspects, they shows naive and juvenility. For instance, I depend upon my parents until my tweenties; I have bare knowledge about the outside environment. In that case how I am supposed to make my own decision by myself. Gradually, I had past my late tweenties under my father supervision. Providing all kind of supports and sharing difficulties of their life helped me to have a better imagination/picture about the real world. Thus, the dependence of the younger generation on their parents is huge as compared to previous generation.
Similarly, the vulnerability, the young people have todays, make their decision less productive. young people have been influenced by the negative factors most often. Without considering the pro and cons, they act upon the things which can hurt them inb future. Many young people have living separately from their parents as they think they were mature enough to spouse them themselves. Although their effort to be independent, most of the independent young have been suffered from the pre mature decsion; some are indulgent in sexual matter or drugs, while some young people suffer from the memtal turbulence. that's why younger people habe to consult more often their parents in order to get away form the possible trouble.
In conclusion, the young people nowadays think them capable enough to handle their life but, they are obilvion with their nasty attitude. they may not have experience the single what their parents faced in thier life in that age. So, it is always fruitful for them to receive suggestion from their parents for their better future and prosperous life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99782608696 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57571543826 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528260869565 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.247157695 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9565217391 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381811542435 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117110986225 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672599570631 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258403783999 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114728999098 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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