Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that throughout history young people depend on their parents specially to make decisions. The effect of parents on their children in this way has played a pivotal role in all societies. Due to this importance, scholars have tried to evaluate the amount of this kind of depending and its performance for many years. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea is whether young people are better able to make decisions on their own nowadays or not. I personally contend that by improving the amount of knowledge today people can make decision much easier and more independently. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The fist noteworthy point regarding the issue is that in the past the level of knowledge of each person was lower than today. As a result, the children would be more dependent on the experience of their parents. They needed their parents help in most of their issues to make a proper decision.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that people nowadays can establish an independent life in early age. For instance, they can have their own apartment and live far away from their parents in the age of eighteen when they start their academic studies at university. Also the society accepts this change much easier than before. However, in the past the children would live with their parents until they were married. So, they did not have the change to tackle the problems on their own and they could not expertise the in-dependency.
The last but not the least reason by which the claim is justified is that children these days have more self-confidence and this will help them to take risks and make the decisions on their own. Although there might be some failure in their work, they will at least learn how to face with such problems in further by trial and error. Obtaining expertise by themselves will help them to understand thing deeper and act much better in solving the next problems. To illustrate, I would like to mention the available statistics about the issue. According to statistics, 70% of 18-year-old children can choose a better field of study for their university degree on their own compered to children lived 100 years ago. The issue of choosing a field of study is the most importance comment decision can be made by children in that age.
The issue of making decision by depending on your parents is then, perhaps ironically, a thoroughly modern one the spectrum of global development problems. Above all, I concur with the opinion that the amount of dependency on parents in making decision by children is decreasing nowadays. Besides the aforementioned reasons, there may be other important factors that could be evaluated. This is an area where all countries have much to learn and much to offer.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'at least', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228733459357 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.151228733459 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0812854442344 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0567107750473 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0586011342155 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136105860113 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0378071833648 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58761304398 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302457466919 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111531190926 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283553875236 0.0209618222197 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132325141777 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2885.0 2387.08602151 121% => OK
No of words: 491.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87576374745 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317718940937 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238289205703 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183299389002 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12016293279 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58761304398 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501018329939 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 58.6003089641 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4583333333 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.997721273 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.208333333 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.2872539036 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.51063829787 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426282475614 0.300154397459 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117455819566 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791964220274 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492187382279 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123241708485 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159542266076 0.114077575197 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702560211949 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44903389649 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00907582000044 0.067059652881 14% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289764916479 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837105817938 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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