As the time passes by, people tend to develop the ability to make their own mature and rational decisions in their life. Therefore, I am of the opinion that young people of today’s context are better able to make own decisions in their life without the help of the parents than in comparison to past.
To begin with, due to the swift development of the modern world, I think that young people are greatly influenced by the world of technologies and movies . The advancement in the technologies has enabled the young people to perform their task without the aid of their parents. Moreover, they also find many tutorials and assistance in the internet, which will certainly help the young people to contemplate and differentiate between good and bad decisions. For instance, I can make my own decision regarding my education as I can easily choose and review my subject of interest from the internet without consulting my parents. Similarly, the strong and independent characters depicted in the movies might also influence or inspire the young people to develop maturity and choose the right path in the life. However, in the past, the young people did not have access to these things, so, ultimately they had no other options other than consulting the parent or asking for their aid.
Furthermore, I believe that young people are now more liberal than in past. In the past, young people were confined to make their own decisions regarding their life. In the other words, they were binded with strict rules and regulations. They could not even choose the carrier of their passion without asking the permission from the parents. However, now young people have gained much more freedom that they have access to everything whether it is facilities or decision making.
In conclusion, contemplating the aforementioned assertions, I agree that young people can now survive independently and make their rational decisions without their parents support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09034267913 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71481155274 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.110307088 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424944060029 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170800988879 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116927458949 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314720555594 0.150856017488 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560277213699 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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