The journey of our life is very long. We meet and make ample of friends during this journey. However, we are not able maintain our friendship consistently with all of them. So, we choose to make new friends as we go on with our life. Therefore, I am of the opinion that the ability to make new friends is more important than the ability to maintain friendships with limited people over long duration for the sake of our happiness.
To begin with, as we move on with our life, we also tend to make new friends. Those new friends could be as important as the old friends. The new friends could also assist us in every ups and downs of our life like what old friends did. Thus, I believe we must fortify our ability to make new friends as we never know when we need others help and our old friends might not always be available. So, in this case, I consider new friends as gem. For instance, Ram is my new friend, whom I met last week at the party. Since then, we have always been in touch with each other. After a month, I had a problem as I was sacked out of my job and I had no money. So at that time, Ram lent me some money and he also referred me to one of his relatives’ company. Considering this circumstance, I am really grateful that I made a new friend. Thus, I think making new friends is very significant for us to be happy.
On the other hand, talking about our friendship with limited number of people, we cannot never learn different natures of the people. To learn the different perspective of the people, we must make new friends as we will merely be confined to same idea again and again by being friends with small number of people. Moreover, we can also expand our knowledge and ideas if we tend to meet new people. Not only that, we may also get bored by the same old jokes and companies, which can make us unhappy and our life will lack astonishments.
In conclusion, I believe we should develop our ability to make new friends easily for the sake of our happiness and prosperity. Therefore, contemplating my aforementioned assertions, I present my disagreement with the given statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The journey of our life is very long. We...
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...ration for the sake of our happiness. To begin with, as we move on with our li...
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... fortify our ability to make new friends as we never know when we need others hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, talking about, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40051020408 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57260131785 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2798869792 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4090909091 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258284737475 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938184158468 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084410494127 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191660179105 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760472832179 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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