Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question is whether in twenty years there will be fewer cars or not. Everyone with regard to his private viewpoint may support a specific direction toward this statement. Some believe that the number of cars will be decrease in twenty years. While, others have a conviction that the traditional cars will be present all the time. I am unanimous with the former group because in my opinion, the development of technology it would make a big progress, so, the cars would be replaced with other vehicles. I will vastly elucidate my vantage point through two salient reasons.
To begin with, one of the reasons that it is very important is that with the development of technology, people are seeking to invent vehicles that are more convenient for them in meaning that they do not have to put a lot of effort on their usage. Also, they would make sure that these devices do not cause any negative impact on the environment, such as polluting the air.
The recent study has shown that the level of air pollution has reached the peak level. This, means that people should be warned about it and look for other alternatives to reduce this bad environment condition. That's why, It is very important to invent new vehicles that are more practical in all aspects.
Furthermore, another reason that should be considered is that with the reduction of the cars people would be able to save more money. If they can use more economic types of transportation, they could benefit form increasing their incomes. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by University of Toronto has asserted that people that have more savings, They tend to spend those money in searching for new ways, how to live their life in a more convenient way possible. Because of this, the growth of individuals income, would bring these new ways of facilities.
To sum up, I strongly believe that in twenty years wold be a lot of changes one of them is the reduction of the car usage and the better quality of life for people which would lead to a longevity of humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cars will be decrease in twenty years. While, others have a conviction that the trad...
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Suggestion: That's
... reduce this bad environment condition. Thats why, It is very important to invent new...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omic types of transportation, they could benefit form increasing their incomes. A...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...t have more savings, They tend to spend those money in searching for new ways, how to live ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75698324022 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58001534851 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5259452334 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212316808864 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756993779932 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749645194346 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106695986143 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876156896316 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.