Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:"It is better to read books on an electronic device then it is to read traditional books on paper
reading on an electronic device has both pro's and con's. For example if a student is pretty studious and does not get easily deviated by unnecessary things then he can use a electronic device. one of the major pro's of using electronic device is saving the paper and tree's. When you read on an electronic device alot of space is saved, you do not need to create a mini library or make extra space for the books you purchase. Nowadays every electronic device has an in built dictionary to it, if at all there is a word which one does not understand they can easily search it by tapping on the word. The drawback of electronic device is it strains your eyes and you cannot read continuously. you need to charge your device frequently.
reading in a traditional way is much more satisfying. one can mark all the points they read. many readers have a hobby of collecting books. they also helps by lending the books or exchanging of books which many of us used to do in our childhood.
reading on a paper helps in more concentration or sometimes that how it is interpreted by many. it can be read at any time and any number of times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...harge your device frequently. reading in a traditional way is much more satisfying. one can mark a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4019138756 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58388268212 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5361663034 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377473874413 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126519984745 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751228902191 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216598731107 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872688897623 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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